Perdu Dans Ses Yeux (Lost In Her Eyes) Poem by Alex Herdman

Perdu Dans Ses Yeux (Lost In Her Eyes)

Rating: 5.0


This was originally written in french.

Weightless
Floating over skies like
Drops of golden sun dancing
Upon the clouds
Mezmorized by the rhythmic swaying
Of grass on a sunny hillside
Words stuttered like
Ripples in a lake
Calm
Serene like
The rain dropping
One
As the world becomes Hazel
And I'm lost in her eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy Taylor 25 September 2011

Are you the famous Irish poet?

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Annie Maloney 01 April 2008

hi Zander it's annie i love this poem it is one of the best poems i have ever read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (you r a heka good poet) also this poem is so cute

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Lucy Garner 25 March 2008

Very well done. Evocative. Nice work. Eyes, what a very intresting, yet pleasent topic. I almost feel as though I am looking into this persons eyes. Beautiful, I must say, unless it is a guy, in whitch case handsome. French- good idea.

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Jurietta Duraan 15 March 2008

A beautiful tribute to a moment that meant a lot.... lovely romantic poem, Alex.

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Subbaraman N V 15 March 2008

When we feel one with nature, we are elevated to heaven indeed!

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