Perhaps I Am Already Too Old Poem by Shalom Freedman

Perhaps I Am Already Too Old

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I may be too old to ever say anything again
Too old to think and feel with passion
As I once did
Perhaps I am already too old
And dry and empty inside
Shriveled down and shaking slightly
Perhaps I am too old
And all my lines are one flat line
And all my feeling one flat line
And I am already inside
Down close to the ground
Under and small
Perhaps I am too old
To be alive
And write a poem
Perhaps these lines too
Are the last sigh of the dead
At the funeral of the living

Monday, December 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: aging
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 16 December 2014

Too old to think and feel but still aging does not become obstacle to life because still courage shines with affection. Nice writing.

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Rajnish Manga 15 December 2014

I salute to you for coming up with this poem seasoned in realism. This is an humble revelation of all that is linked with old age. Thanks for a beautiful poem.

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Shalom Freedman

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Troy New York
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