Permanence Poem by Carmina Abrenica

Permanence

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In the silence of the breaking dawn
A clangor of voices incessantly echoed
Dwelt over fancies of the truth and nay fawn
Hath these feelings rest on a place of abode

Hath your eyes shown a gesture of surrender?
Do your words speak of a desire to adjourn?
In the affluence of your mind, will adieu ever linger?
In this road we partake, will you be a lasting sojourn?

In the silence of the breaking dusk
Hath thee to stay is a promising plea
A quiet saunter down the never fleeting road
To share days and nights of serene perpetuity

24thJune2017

Permanence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2017

A clangor of voices incessantly echoed In the affluence of your mind, will adieu ever linger? asting sojourn? silence of the breaking dusk serene perpetuity very fine coinage of words together to express exquisite beauty. Great imagination. very expressive poem. Loved to read it. Thank you dear poetess. tony

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Carmina Abrenica 08 February 2018

Thank you. ☺

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