The Call Poem by Carmina Abrenica

The Call

Rating: 5.0


The pink-tinged cloud thwart the sea
Gestured hope from a promising plea
The grain of sand I felt as I walked t'wards thr shore
Tickled a wish that I may be with the one I adore

Oh you're miles away from me
Farthest from what my eyes can see
Standing next to an old coconut tree
Savoring the breeze of your every mem'ry

The warmth of the sun made me gaze in wonder
How fate drew us even closer
How life gave us an abyss to share
How love sparked a fire so sweet and rare

As I think of you, my love
I always praise the heavens above
Nip in the bud time and distance served not
As changing seasons shall never disentangle our knot

~mcva
3.31.18 8: 04 am

The Call
Friday, April 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 28 April 2018

Dear Carmina, such a poem full of love....10++++

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 April 2018

Very impressive write, Carmina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Carmina. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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