Perspectives Poem by grace mariner

Perspectives

Rating: 4.5


All on this mortal plane has a beginning and an ending.
The Alpha.
The Omega.
Birth and death.
There is always closure, painful or not...
it's all in your perspective.
I was with my dad as he took his final breath.
It was beautiful and painful.
I was happy for him to suffer no more, sad for us to lose him.
As I watched my mothers brain unravel, it was heartbreaking.
But for her it gave her several years of life with a newer, happier perspective.
At the conclusion, when she could speak no more, live no more,
I felt, as I did for my dad...
happy for her peace, sad for her loss, in spite of how unhappy her life had been and how she damaged us.
So you and I have obviously reached our final destination.
The train boarded, but no goodbye, no closure.
And I am angry at your cowardice and deliberate cruelty in my world so full of betrayals.
And I question my realities...
who could commit such an evil deed?
Maybe you are still a vile and angry man, I'm not sure anymore.
But I cannot hate you because you weren't able to be strong enough.
I grieve this death, this most significant loss, the hurt you inflicted by not giving me my closure.
But I grieve the most for you and that damaged part that will eventually consume you.
You cannot be what you cannot be.
You denied yourself closure too

Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,betrayer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mike Smith 21 March 2016

really enjoyed this poem. It's raw and written from a deep place where emotions are born. It is uninhibited. Powerful. A great write straight from the heart.10 There is one line that (unlike the rest) seems a bit insincere to me. The third line from last says 'But I grieve for you the most' To me the poem doesn't read that way. You don't seem to grieve this person at all. If anything you almost want to see them suffer because of this lack of closure. You want them to feel as bad or worse than it made you feel. This is a perfectly natural response to (the poem topic) betrayal. In full honesty, do you really grieve For this person? Have sympathy for them thinking about when this truth comes back to haunt them? Or do you grieve Because of this person? And so you want them to feel the same pain they caused you?

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