Ph: Echo: Extremes Poem by Brian Johnston

Ph: Echo: Extremes

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As I cross glacial ice at fifty below,
My spit freezes solid before hitting the ground,
Frozen horizons in a world white with snow,
Even current goals reverberate piano,
Dreaming of all the warmth that I've ever found,
My home in your heart is really all that I know.

At ten thousand feet chute has not shown its face,
After leaving the plane I just feel so alone,
But for air rush - of falling's fact there's no trace.
It is always like that when man and sky embrace,
When my chute opens, near deaf ears turn to stone
And songs of love all seem to have bled into space.

Ninety feet below the sea is quite a thrill,
Colors fade to grey in subterranean light,
Breathing compressed air that could easily kill.
For escaping to care, I remember the drill,
'Keep calm' the rule, death's embrace hidden in fright,
Recalling in depth the buried thrust of my will

Birds of paradise dance on jungle stages
In the prurient hope that they can hypnotize.
Seeking a mystical move that engages,
Weird things that no unsotted fool does for wages,
Enticed by a five second chance at glazed eyes.
Makes you wonder in fact what a sage is?

Are we so easily duped by life's antics,
Are both sexes seduced by instinctual charms
Self-talk assuring that we are romantics.
Perhaps we should take time to study semantics
And just why not one of us hears the alarms?
To an alien race we must all seem like hicks!

Saturday, July 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian Johnston
July 19,2014

Do a PH search for the poem that inspired my poem called 'And I Think of You' by Lora Colon for some additional reading pleasure. Read her poem first and then mine for the Echo.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 31 July 2014

I could not find a poem called AND I THINK OF YOU. Where is it? I can see this Echo: Extremes takes place in four extreme environments, namely, frozen tundra, parachuting from airplane, under the sea and in a rain forest. But how do they echo each other? The speaker is alone apparently in every situation. I'll read it again. Just a minute.... So on this my third reading, I gather this about how we set ourselves up for the experience of love. It's an interplay of instinct, day-dreaming, memories, hopes, pangs of loneliness. But when attraction possesses us, we forget all of these components and feel the wholeness of desire. What is required, of course, is an object of desire. Once that is identified, the experience is holistic

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Lorraine Colon 19 July 2014

Your poem takes us on quite a journey.... of extremes. Well titled. Regarding the last stanza - I don't think we're duped by life's antics. Is the robin duped by the wiggling worm? Instinct tells him to go for the worm. We go for what attracts us, for who attracts us. Forget semantics. Instinct is all we need. We've done fine with it so far. And that alien race might be something to fear if they don't have the romantic instinct we possess. This is what prevents us from annihilating each other. But a thoroughly enjoyable poem!

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