Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Ph: Life: Who I Am Comments

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I wish I could be clearer too
But when a mirror comes to view
I find reflections blur the tons
Of promises I've yet to keep.
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Brian Johnston
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 March 2015

Very nicely envisioned. Best word play. I like this poem. The lines I most like are But Bible’s truth is Parable And God’s Love not unbearable Though we may fret, bemoan our debt, God's Justice earned, but Grace God’s gift. Though truth may not be found in me In loving God I can be free, My sails are full, sin’s lost its pull, My restless heart no more adrift...... Many thanks respected sir, keep the ball rolling.

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