Sunday, March 2, 2014

Ph: Limerick (Mildly Amusing) #02 Comments

Rating: 4.0

A temptress whose first name was Ella,
Had her best snares set out for a fella,
He saw through her ruses
And not fond of bruises
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Abekah Emmanuel 09 September 2015

Let me acknowledge that, this is very interesting and sweet rhymed limerick. Sometimes people disappoint our hopes by ignoring our seductive ways, but if he didnt see her as his Cinderella, am sure the poet will. ha!

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Valsa George 23 July 2014

This is indeed a first rate limerick. Enjoyed it much! Yes the temptress was cleverly evaded with a simple (harmless?) remark!

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Patricia Grantham 12 March 2014

I really love this Limerick. Sad for Cinderella and happy for the Fella! Her seduction did not work. Enjoyed.

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