Ph: Love: Miss Remembering Comments

favorite lines: “to those who think me perhaps rotten, that our last kiss whispered someone new.” ……………..yes, BJ, our last kiss WAS telling! “to thirst no more and to forgive life’s flavors that were once too tart.” “and never once forget the rhymes when poems of mine were not cowards.” “such faith can even mountains move, ” …….. yeah, I get the Bible reference! I like the way you switched ‘move mountains’ for your purpose(s) . unfortunately I regret the rhyme ‘move/remove’; but you tried! and, considering the complex rhyme scheme you tackled [and done well with], you‘ve done well enough to merit a trip to MyPoemList …….even though it is a dreaded ‘love poem’. but something seems amiss in the last sentence: “God’s love for you, my Valentine, injustice where, to overthrow, or real sadness that I must remove? ” ………. I mean “injustice where, to overthrow”? ? ? doesn’t sound right to me. thanks for sharing. I don’t yet see the limerick about the pool player(s) . bri :)