Phone....! ! Poem by Dr DHANA LAKSHMI

Phone....! !

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I looked at my phone…………
Weak was my vision
Feeble was my expression
Cud I tell some one my pain……….?
Wud it lessen my ache…?
Know not what to do
I looked at my phone……..
Weak was my vision
Feeble was my expression
Mind blowing ring tones……! !
Mind boggling themes………! !
Innocent caller tunes
Indescribable features……..! !
Infinite contacts………! !
But a..l..a..s
I had no one to call
Nor did any one have to call me…! !
Heart breaking…………. Heart trending…..
Was me n myself………..! !
I had no one to confront……! !
No one to confess……! !
Then a novel idea struck me……..
Though ludicrous ……. Dimwitted………. Brainless
It was…………! !
I decided to buy my self a new phone……! ! !
A phone to call myself……..! !
To check my mind blowing ring tones
To ensure my sweet dialer tones……! !
To catch a glimpse of my mind bloggling themes…! !
A FONE TO CALL MySeLf……………! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sasi Chinthoora 18 August 2015

Dear Dana(Sree) Lexmi your phones is always Silence

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Shija Gireesh 28 February 2011

Dear Lakshmi, let me take this opportunity to congratulate you OpEn HeaTEDly. Even though we've infinte possibilities, its limited in broad sense......the trustworthy.reliable, ......source we become curled twigs. Suffocation...eternal even though its, I'm confident Madamme, ure relaxed a little with divesion in ur thought...HoOpe. Nice poem

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Lalitha iyer 17 November 2009

Come on, , , , , , , , , , , , , , never let some misfortune or some negative friends or ties in life sink you down.............never say die..............come on come on..............what is going on..................no, no, You are not going to hung up...........change your circumstances and attitudes, change the persons you face..............relax, , , , , , , , , , , think positive..............be positive................be confident.............when no one is there.............the Omnipotent God is there........................See with open heart.........what went wrong............why............find out realistic solutions............dont be in fools paradise, , , , , , , , , , , , be positive..................be purely dependent on disciplined thoughts.............dont think unwanted things............think only what you did correct and dont hurt yourself by self indulging no, nos...........come on.

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Joey Valenzuela 16 November 2009

your all poems were lonely.....hehe..... just wonder...

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Ted M 04 August 2009

Nice use of a mobile phone.........

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