Dr DHANA LAKSHMI

Rookie (15th sept / kannur)

Score Board For Life.........! ! - Poem by Dr DHANA LAKSHMI

5 all
The life of my score board read
Oh no
The score board of my life said
So 5 pain
& 5 gains
So now I should settle
And start my life neutral again
But alas
It started again
With zero electric charge
With shimmering bulbs of
Nervousness and anxiousness
Or was I one among the fauna or animal
Who could predict the whether changes
Or even the tsunami
And silently run away
Leaving the humans behind in floods & draughts
I can predict the upcoming pain
Cause I am the biggest pain holder?
I can grab hold of a lie
Cause I am the biggest liar myself?
Who am I scared off?
What am I scared off?
My score board or my life board?
5 all or no all
Neutral… unbiased… wishy washy
Is how I want my score board to look like…! !


Comments about Score Board For Life.........! ! by Dr DHANA LAKSHMI

  • (2/26/2010 7:37:00 PM)


    a very good poem...an insight into the lifestyle of ours...we rarely come across our true selves..as liars.as scarred and scarry with so many gains and pains...we are so distracted from our true selves...a great poem (Report) Reply

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  • Varanasi Ramabrahmam (12/6/2009 2:25:00 AM)


    Your knowledge of scientific matters and current events are very ably mixed with mixed feelings from you. I liked the idea that pains of the worlds are your pains. But we may not live peacefully even for a second when things are happening so violently by the fury of the nature and the nature of the human-beings. Nice poem to contemplate. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2009



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