Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Picture In The Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gloomy eyes saw hollow ahead
Breaths reduced it’s life slowly
Voices walked away further slowly
My body was turning stone mildly.
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Dipali Kamani
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 April 2010

‘…Love has entered me never to go away, /That picture in the dark is clear again’ This conclusion reminds me Vedic affirmation ‘Chayaivati’ [March on and on] Swami Vivekananda remarked we’re son of Bliss why be somber Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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R.k Das 03 March 2009

very intense poem, nice title

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