Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Picturing You Comments

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I can't picture you,
without feeling my heart jump
I can't picture you,
without my breath hitching
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Bianca Haw
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Bianca Haw 23 October 2013

Maybe refer to my poem- Dreaming my future, since they follow on. It's a term of regret, as though the speaker feels pain or sadness in trying to picture the specified person. Their image is tinged with bad memories and regrets...

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Khairul Ahsan 23 October 2013

A sweet poem. 'I can't picture you, without tears threatening to fall' Nice, but why?

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Bianca Haw

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