Ping Pong Poem by Puppy Luver (10 years old)

Ping Pong

Rating: 4.9


Little ping pong ball
back and forth you go
bouncing over table net
on your way to “pro.”

Poor little white ball
hit with a paddle
once two players start,
it’s on with the battle.

It leaped off the table
rolled under the couch
bouncing here and there
I hit my head, “Ouch! ”

Now the game is over
there’s no right or wrong,
til next time they play
the game of Ping Pong.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tristan Asmiralde Tristan 19 January 2026

This is a very good poem.

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Risha : Ahmed 31 March 2007

Lovely poem that. Beautiful

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Jalisa Berrain 28 March 2007

What Frank said to the 10th power.

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Excellent work, P.L....A clever and witty write...Your structure is smooth & flows well..Lot's of potential in that Mind of yours...Keep that pen pumpin', my friend. ~ F.j.R. ~

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