Pins And Needles Poem by Kale Beaudry

Pins And Needles

Rating: 5.0


You remind me of that velvet sewing tomato,
irrevocably bulging with pins
and
needles.
No real purpose at all-just sits there,
consistently jammed full of sharp objects that
make
you
bitch. It's not even real velvet, either,
simply a fabric that I don't remember the name of nor
really
care
for. Even if the pins and
needles
are used
to repair,
revive
or
remedy...

you're still just a sour unrealistic non-velvet tomato left with more empty holes than the leather belt of the universe's largest man.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lu-Lu Martin 24 April 2009

this gave me a chuckle in a kind of peverse way..hehe.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

u are like a young Charles Bukowski

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tom mc quade 17 April 2009

ok ok..i can leave this site now..satisfied that i found a amazing poem here today..excellent job kale :) tom

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Kale Beaudry

Kale Beaudry

Vancouver, BC, Canada
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