Friday, November 22, 2013

Pity Of War Comments

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Guarding each breathe inside the line
Encounter myself for the Patriotic dream of mine
Made do’s and don’t outside the durst
Left Kinship emotions on the admit impediments worst.
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Akhtar Jawad 28 August 2014

I can foresees my Fate somewhere beyond the Blood Forsooth ask – GREAT GOD! Why you gave us Wit which results War? A thoughtful poem.

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Thanks so much for Understanding and appreciating those feelings.

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Abekah Emmanuel 20 August 2014

Indeed, war makes us very piteous and misrable. Sometimes, we do ask God why he allows such a thing to happen to us...very powerful poem, well done!

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So Thankful to you😇Thanks for understanding

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Monica Nagdeote

Monica Nagdeote

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