Platinum 70 Poem by Asma Khan

Platinum 70

Rating: 5.0


In the wandering transparency
of the dazzling twilight
came across a star dancing
in the secrecy of the night


In the rare mystical saga
of the falling stars parade
rose the shinning galaxies
of desires admiring my beautiful shade


In the subtle quietness
of the roaring storms
walked in the seasons of
hopes in new eyes of norms


In the thundering storms
of the questions left unasked
took over a word sailing
through the path uncalled

In the mere disappearance
of the hidden passages' arcade
swirls the wind of change
through dusky evening's shade

Saturday, January 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The name carries a history of memories in it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2016

wandering transparency of the dazzling twilight conveys about entire wonderful imagery here. Interesting drafting shared with reality. Nice sharing.10

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Rajnish Manga 09 January 2016

This is like a celestial dialogue going on in the background of a streak of flashbacks. The narrative is flawless and the rhyming is perfect with a subtle music running through the poem. Hats off to you. Thank you, Mdm.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2016

Superb poem, one of the best poem I read today.....10+

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