Asma Khan

Platinum 70 - Poem by Asma Khan

In the wandering transparency
of the dazzling twilight
came across a star dancing
in the secrecy of the night

In the rare mystical saga
of the falling stars parade
rose the shinning galaxies
of desires admiring my beautiful shade

In the subtle quietness
of the roaring storms
walked in the seasons of
hopes in new eyes of norms

In the thundering storms
of the questions left unasked
took over a word sailing
through the path uncalled

In the mere disappearance
of the hidden passages' arcade
swirls the wind of change
through dusky evening's shade

Topic(s) of this poem: hope

Form: Prose Poem

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The name carries a history of memories in it.

Comments about Platinum 70 by Asma Khan

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/9/2016 12:36:00 PM)

    wandering transparency
    of the dazzling twilight conveys about entire wonderful imagery here. Interesting drafting shared with reality. Nice sharing.10
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  • Rajnish Manga (1/9/2016 12:27:00 PM)

    This is like a celestial dialogue going on in the background of a streak of flashbacks. The narrative is flawless and the rhyming is perfect with a subtle music running through the poem. Hats off to you. Thank you, Mdm. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/9/2016 11:27:00 AM)

    Superb poem, one of the best poem I read today.....10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2016

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