Playing With Time Poem by Diana Americano

Playing With Time

Rating: 3.5


sitting in class
hoping for time to pass
quickly Time please
just pass by!
don't make me die!
let me see his smile
to make my life worth while
Time oh Time you make me sob
when you stop the clock
why play games?
if my day will remain the same
time you have taken me to my demise!
but what is this?
you have given me a surprise
Time you've begun to run!
i see him
though my eyes filled of tears of mist
but time
why do you not slow down?
Time you have taken us apart
you have torn out my heart
but its just another day
another price to pay
for playing with Time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bella Hernandez 27 March 2012

Beautiful imagery, and metaphors and nice choice of words... You actually made Time sound like a person Time is a trecherous thing to toy with, first it goes slow just to torchure us like it wants then speeds up just to break people in half ~Bella

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