Landrey

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Please - Poem by Landrey

'get together! ! '
we're just friends and
satisfied here.
Let It Rest Please

'hold her hand, dude! ! '
don't you think I
always want to? ?
Trust My Time Please

'love cuz' we do! ! '
let us just ex-
perience this.
Off Our Backs Please


Comments about Please by Landrey

  • Jonzo Bandwagoner (12/29/2006 11:57:00 PM)

    Before I comment on this incredible poem, I have a question: Did you mean to use the word 'ex-perience' like you did in the 3rd stanza... sort of hinting at what might happen if you rushed into a relationship (ex..) ? If you did, that's some great usage of broken up words, landrey! This poem conveys very relevant emotions, and I give it a 9.99987872. For convenience sake, I'm making it a 10.
    -bandy
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, December 17, 2010


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