Please Poem by Landrey

Please

Rating: 5.0


'get together! ! '
we're just friends and
satisfied here.
Let It Rest Please

'hold her hand, dude! ! '
don't you think I
always want to? ?
Trust My Time Please

'love cuz' we do! ! '
let us just ex-
perience this.
Off Our Backs Please

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonzo Bandwagoner 29 December 2006

Before I comment on this incredible poem, I have a question: Did you mean to use the word 'ex-perience' like you did in the 3rd stanza... sort of hinting at what might happen if you rushed into a relationship (ex..) ? If you did, that's some great usage of broken up words, landrey! This poem conveys very relevant emotions, and I give it a 9.99987872. For convenience sake, I'm making it a 10. -bandy

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