Alice Winters

Please Dont Make Me Do This - Poem by Alice Winters

Please don't make me do this,
Take the knife to my arms,
Seeing the blood flowing down my skin,
I tried to be strong,
To handle it the best I could,
I don't want to be this,
Knowing what I've done,
Would make me ashamed,
Please don't let do this
Come help me out,
Why do I feel so lonely,
All I want to do is shout,
Scream to people,
And tell them I'm here,
Tell them to notice me,
But that's the the thing i fear.

Comments about Please Dont Make Me Do This by Alice Winters

  • Eben S - J (10/9/2008 2:15:00 PM)

    i really like this poem can't count the times i felt this way but gotta keep trying to get through. Try take each day as a new chance. I don't know if i'm doing anything right or wrong as its my first day using poemhunter so could i ask you to read mine and tell me what you think? (Report)Reply

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  • Michael ShafferMichael Shaffer (10/6/2008 8:30:00 PM)

    You are not alone Alice feeling this way. Writing has always help me release my despair as well as my joy. Keep writing and hang in there. (Report)Reply

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  • E L (10/6/2008 7:43:00 PM)

    Oh I am so feeling you. Sometimes we all feel this self doubt. Don't let life knock you and your wonderful talent of expression. Thank you for sharing. For the record screaming so helps ;) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 6, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 13, 2008

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