Friday, June 9, 2006

Please Sit…while I Cry! Comments

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My tiny palm touching her face,
When on her lap I 'd lie...
When world slept, I kept her awake,
'Please sit...while I cry! '
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Paramita Roy
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Paramita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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lovely poem paramita, beautiful ending, reminds me of couple of my poems about my parents. Keep up the good work.

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Cirrus Spray 09 June 2006

Something I can relate to - warm and personal. Nice poem! Regards, Archana

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Paramita Roy

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