Atsar MusePen

Rookie - 0 Points (May 22,1962)

Please Wait…your Life Is Loading - Poem by Atsar MusePen

By now you are disconnected as expected
Long waiting lines unprotected
A finger taps Codes or calls
High wire wraps and erodes us all

Bugles rest while death phones speak
Logging an adventure Hands on Wheels Week
And please slow down as not to bend the curve
Heading already I can see the need to swerve

Clueless, wireless, Oil more, gone
Layers thinning spray this on
No one’s winning when ceiling meets floor
For the Captain’s oars don’t reach shore

Did I mention you can see it from here?
Fed to me continuously while downloading beer
Green is grass and Grey is growing
Firewalled and flamed Your IP is showing

Fattening futures on overfed eyes
Unplugging creatures commercialized lies
Can’t find the pay phone for other cells tried
Keep the door open and probe inside

That’s what I saw while passing by
Hidden amongst the candied believers Eyes
All compressed and attached to Lies
Temporary Out of Order ….till next time.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 1, 2011


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