Poème Fin Complet Poem by John Allen Richter

Poème Fin Complet



A poem will end when a poem will end,
not a moment before or aft.
When a reader has fun, or has just begun
to explode his belly with laughs.

If the subject be love, or white frilly doves,
then end with a heart on a stick.
While painted clowns and western ghost towns
should end with a frightful lick.

A walk through a park or moonlit dark
should end with an 'ooo' or 'ah'
While Christmas tales or Christmas sales
might end with a 'boo' or 'bah! '

Poems of rabbits or squeaky new gadgets
could end in many a way.
But the foot of a rabbit can be its own gadget
when put in the pocket to play.
So sad to see, that three legged he
as he barely hops away.

My favorite end is when he comes again
to offer his life to me.
For in the long run - the rabbit is done
and his life full of misery.

Acquiescence, dear friend, is the very best end
when the rabbits do come to thee.
So cut off their feet, and be quite complete
for the very best fin complet……

Friday, January 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: whimsical
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When I posted this poem originally there was a certain confidence that most people would recognize rabbit's feet as good luck charms. As a boy my father gave me one and it remained prominently in my pocket for years. So in my neck of these great woods it is rather common to carry a rabbits foot. Only a few days after posting this poem I found that it had been reviewed by the website, apparently someone took my words as a call to go out and mercilessly cut the feet from rabbits and was probably offended by that. I apologize to anyone who might think similarly. Whether the trade of rabbit fur and meat is still legal or not, at least in the past it was legal and so even the feet were sold for profit. Generally, they're dyed pink or blue, sometimes yellow - and almost always affixed to a key ring. But I would like to very firmly state that rabbit's feet are never - ever - taken from live rabbits. And as such, the rabbits would never be returned to the wild with only three feet. That line in my poem was supposed to be whimsical - as is the category this poem is posted within! Have fun and watch out for those three legged rabbits! Or frogs in wheel chairs (and no legs left) coming out of restaurants!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 January 2015

Beautiful poem for endless poem reading. Nice composition with vibrant thought attracts attention or reader while in journey for reading such beautiful poem shared.

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