Poem 001: Charmed Poem by Samer Madbak

Poem 001: Charmed

Rating: 5.0


It needs no much talking
I’ll straightway declare:
It’s friendship I’m stalking-
And friends are so rare-
So make no refusing
My dear, I can’t bear
The mere thought of losing
Those glances so fair
And those wondrous eyes
That dare to outglare
The Beauty that lies
Up there, I would swear!

My heart leaps and capers
When hearing your call
Your sweet eyes, my tapers,
Enkindle my soul.


Blaouza
September 11th 1986

Saturday, December 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

taper: '1 - A small or very slender candle.2 - A long wax-coated wick used to light candles or gas lamps. 3 - A source of feeble light.' So symbolic LIGHTED 'tapers', could, symboliically, enkindle [ 'To set afire; light. To incite; arouse.'] one's soul.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

'caper': 'A leap; a skip or spring, as in dancing or mirth, or in the frolic of a kid or lamb, or a child; hence, a sportive or capricious action; a prank.' [a prank is a trick, to me]

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

SO AT TIMES 'straightway' and 'straightaway' are synomyms. This is a 'very early' one of Samer's poems, at the end of his 'poems by 'Hit' list'. ;) line 1: I'd use 'not much'

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

oops. straightaway as an adjective also may mean 'immediate' : ) AND, as a noun, it may mean 'a: the straight part of a closed racecourse: STRETCH b: a straight and unimpeded stretch of road or way'

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Bharati Nayak 17 August 2023

Yes, it needs no much talking.Love will gently enter your heart and you will wonder whether it is love or only friendship!

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Bharati Nayak 17 August 2023

Amazingly beautiful poem that will charm any one who will see friendship in a new light.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

*****

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

OK, OK, OK! So the author uses 'friendship' instead of 'love', but I HOPE love include friendship. I especially enjoyed the last seven lines of stanza 1. 'My dear.....would swear! '.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2023

This is very 'romanitc' in my non-romantic eyes. I tend to shy away from writing of reading LOVE poems, but this one is a GREAT ONE! ! ! : ) bri 5 stars

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Bri Edwards 24 August 2023

oops. I misspelled 'romantic'! !

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