Anna Cellmer

Rookie (06-04-1974 / Olsztyn, Poland)

Poem To My Favourite Critic On This Site - Poem by Anna Cellmer

Do you think
There is something special
In this piece
Do you think it is something real
Or it's just a shit what I did
Please tell me
What do you think
David

Do you think
This is something good
Or it's just a crap
Tell me that
I need your words so much
I want to see your critic sight
To feel all right
And I know that you will come
And you will tell me this
What I miss

Tell me the true
And write another masterpiece
About me, please


Comments about Poem To My Favourite Critic On This Site by Anna Cellmer

  • (12/31/2005 8:48:00 AM)


    Your poems have so much to offer.
    This is great controlled writing, you
    decided not to lower yourself to
    anyone else's level. A good decision,
    another fantastic poem.
    Kindest Regards Slim. x.
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  • (12/31/2005 8:16:00 AM)


    Anna,
    Excellent work! Reminds me of a piece I wrote to MY favorite critic titled 'Ode to Herb, ' but mine was written as a tribute and in honor of a brilliant man. A 10 from me.

    Shannon
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  • (12/31/2005 8:03:00 AM)


    Lovely piece Anna, you could have summed it up with two word, the latt being 'off'. Istead you chose the path of a more reasoned direction. It works so well. Such humour! Such defiance! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 31, 2005



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