Poet/Bum Comments

I was utterly useless at boxing due to my short sightedness and tendency to use karate moves when getting hammered, like a swift kick in the crotch. My enforced army boxing career lasted about 2 minutes! Criticism of my poetry however tends to be by people beyond arms' length. Dammit.

fresh perspective, intersting parellel, like the closing lines

Great ryming scheme. Good piece. Thanks for sharing. I will read more of your work.