Poetry/Writing Poem by Emma Alberts

Poetry/Writing



Blank page
Pencil ain't grooving
Mind is weak
The gears aren't moving

Slowly being filled
One line at a time
Sometimes it's hard
To keep these lines in rhyme

But eventually
I complete, finish the page
Now for the hard part
Reading it on stage

(Winter 2008, Age 11, Wisconsin)

Sunday, February 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: rhyme
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Combs 03 February 2008

ha it's pretty good... one thing...it loose a slightly on rhyme at the end... could you please comment my poems as well?

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