Pomegranate3 Poem by rammah majed

Pomegranate3

Rating: 2.8


eat pomegranate but me dont hate
onme dont late and now i feel great
you are the sun shin and you are number nine
you are the gold door and you are number four
you how are you you number tow

thanks

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanvi Damle 18 January 2010

ur rhyming scheme's gr8...though u need 2 learn alot mre n mature...but 4 ur age itz rockin...write as much as u can....

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