Tuesday, June 5, 2007

Poor Henry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sorrow swept across her face
As the reality sets in that he will not be hers
Death has robed her silently.
As he slept he slipped into
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Damian Patterson
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Goldy Locks 06 June 2007

daring, bold, with a fine flow to it. the unforeseen twist at the end, capped it off for me. keep on, sjg

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