Friday, May 11, 2007

Popping In Popping Out (Fun Poem 16) Comments

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I got on messenger to have a chat,
with a friend across the sea,
but all they could see,
was me popping in and out,
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David Harris
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Albert Wong 04 June 2007

I don't like: 'Like the magician’s magic, ' it is not smooth enough.

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JoAnn McGrath 11 May 2007

That was truely a David - in - the - Box.......or maybe a Vicar - in - the - pulpit...either way a fun write on a frustrasting happening: O)

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