Thursday, November 12, 2015

Power Will Start Falling Comments

Rating: 4.5

Tears fell forever before
Mirrors of death in thousands of wars
Witnesses of life in our brightest moments
Now, fall like simple drops of rain,
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Tamara Robalo
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Sergio 16 February 2019

Spectacular writing!

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Kelly Kurt 12 November 2015

A nice commentary in poem form. Thanks, Tamara

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

A very interesting poem Tamara.. Thank you for sharing... ______________ P: S: ”We waited to come home till the runrise Now, we're left behind We used to fear the blinding light Now, we're coming out of the dark” I assume it should be 'sunrise' not 'runrise', isn't it? ? You can fix the typo Cheers :)

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