Saturday, November 18, 2017

Precipitation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tiny glittering drops
They are in a moment's catch
Hit the ground it stops
And ends it with a splash!
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Roasted Mallows
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Elaine Sept 19 November 2017

This was lovely, it brought thoughts of spring and those beautiful rainbows. Welcome to Poemhunter

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Rajnish Manga 18 November 2017

We welcome you on this Forum, Dear Friend.

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Rajnish Manga 18 November 2017

The poet is a keen observer of nature and nicely portrays its changing nuances. Thanks a lot.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2017

Tiny glittering drops They are in a moment's catch Hit the ground it stops And ends it with a splash! - A wonderful start! Welcome to Poem Hunter..10

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Joseph Michael De Ramos 28 November 2017

Thanks! Though, I personally kind of liked most the 2nd stanza followed by the 4th.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Roasted M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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