Thursday, September 3, 2020

Predator Stalks Prey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Predator stalks prey
As the angels depart.
All this vibrant beauty,
That's lasted the ages,
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Shaun Cronick 13 September 2020

Yes, its a mess out there and also day by day, hour by hour. Too many power hungry fruitcakes propped up by the uneducated and unenlightened. We just wait in the wings holding on to hope. A full score and thank you Dominic for telling how it is, but will it ever be...time will tell. For with hope and time things change eventually and for the better.

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Dominic Windram 09 September 2020

Thanks Deluke..you're right, it is a rather depressing state of affairs, perhaps things will change for the better..who knows? ! However, unfortunately, I doubt it will be in my lifetime.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 September 2020

Nice poem. The world is turning topsy turvy due to lack of leadership and extremism

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