I weaved my way through traffic, ecstatic to see him again. My stomach flipped, as it did whenever I thought or spoke of him. He was everything to me, and saying 'I do' to him was possibly the best choice I had made in my entire life. We did everything that we could together, and our bond was almost unbreakable. He was the reason I woke up with a smile every morning, the reason I found everything easier and more entertaining to do.
He always kept me laughing, and he knew how to make the best out of every situation.
About fifteen minutes later, I pulled up into our driveway and I ignored the tugging feeling at my chest. I replaced it with a bounce in my steps.
Once I made it upstairs, his once bright ocean blue eyes stared lifelessly at my chocolate ones. My heart thundered like Thor's powerful strength and I could only hear my thoughts racing.
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This is a very powerful piece. The emotion really comes through with all the descriptions and imagery. I would definitely like to read more about how this situation came to be. I especially like the last line, I think it's very powerful without having to explain itself. Great job :)