Sunday, April 3, 2011

Pretender Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fake smile, like makeup you wear it.

It's easier to pretened, but the pretend isn't real.
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Amber Muir
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Stefanie Fontker 21 September 2011

There is a lot of mystery behind this poem, it creates an interesting atmosphere. Beautiful poetry, beautiful writing, here. I eagerly await more of your works.

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Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2011

A well penned and poignant write! You got what it takes to make it in the poetry world, talent! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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