It was that cloudy yet a blissful day of July,
All my years were gone in lullaby.
The roads were cleaned and the houses looked new,
Looking out of the windows, Oh! I still remember that view.
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I really really like the Still enters my mind, as the door is ajar image. A great sentiment to represent the wondering mind.
Saw a fetch of dragonflies. Liked that combo picked up the rhyme with drenched. Good work. My poems are under Captain Cur, if your interested.