Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Prism Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was that cloudy yet a blissful day of July,
All my years were gone in lullaby.
The roads were cleaned and the houses looked new,
Looking out of the windows, Oh! I still remember that view.
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Parthaproteem Roy
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Captain Cur 29 April 2012

Saw a fetch of dragonflies. Liked that combo picked up the rhyme with drenched. Good work. My poems are under Captain Cur, if your interested.

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Calico Jack 24 April 2012

I really really like the Still enters my mind, as the door is ajar image. A great sentiment to represent the wondering mind.

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