Tuesday, November 21, 2017

Prison Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dripping, dripping, dripping
Hardly ever sitting
Eyes glued to the bars
That makes up their whole world
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April Braithwaite
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2017

Dripping, dripping, dripping Hardly ever sitting Eyes glued to the bars That makes up their whole world Waiting for the key To let them feel free -The harsh realities of a prisoner's life is brilliantly depicted in your poem..I liked it so much that reminded me of my own poem, 'A Prisoner's Confession'...you have articulated it in different tone, in a very precise and subtle way, a poignant write..Many congratulations..10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2017

A beautifully crafted write about autism. It is painful to read yet it enlightens our minds regarding autism.

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