Sunday, April 8, 2018

Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun, the moon and the stars,
The air, the water and the land.
The flower, the trees and the grass,
They all joyfully witness the promises we had,
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Joana Marie Ferry
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Mysia Hayling 12 April 2018

very interesting poem. It evokes the feeling of passion and pain. A love promised dies, of deceiving lies. Keep writing. I enjoyed reading it.

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Mysia Hayling 12 April 2018

very interesting poem. I enjoyed reading it. How love promised so quickly dies, buried in lies. Keep writing Joana

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 April 2018

Joana, such a touching heartfelt poem....10++++

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