Friday, May 18, 2018

PROSPECT Comments

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Anyone who wanted to could leave, could gather
shivering on the south side of the river,
labelled and provided for with socks and sweaters
and a little cash. We walked across the water
in our thousands and left behind for ever
all that was great: the monuments and sewers,
cathedrals, theatres, mothers, lovers, brothers
as the flames licked at the city's raging heart.

Faced with the prospect of living forever,
we headed for the country lanes together,
imagining the parties de campagne among the clover
and the stories each would tell the others
on the way. We had left behind for ever
all that we had loved. It was a start.
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Jane Draycott
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Chinedu Dike 18 May 2018

Really a poignant rendition embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jane and do remain enriched.

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