Saturday, May 23, 2009

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Always aim for the sun, cos if you miss you'll land between the stars.
I believed that when I was 9 years old but now it only makes me laugh.
To land between the stars you say? Cold and all alone?
Looking down upon the life you've lost, knowing your on your own.
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Paul Daniel
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Stephen Stirk 23 May 2009

A poem well written and with a great moral. Shoulder your own life and get on with it. I much enjoyed this Best Steve

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