Friday, December 4, 2015

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God, he is called
With the features of his name in reverse.
Adorations accompanied with success are ascribed to him.
Libation indebted to him.
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Fawole Immanuel Taiwo
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Spock The Vegan 04 December 2015

I like your poem - with one exception. God is not an it. I repsectfully ask that you edit the poem, changing the second line to: With the features of His name in reverse. Thanks for sharing.

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Shakil Ahmed 04 December 2015

This illusive fiction depicts bully That gets all man's achievement attributed to itself alone. An epitome of egocentrism it is. Bereft of trouble shooting. - - - well written, thanks

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