Monday, April 2, 2018

Pulling Away Comments

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I am trying to pull myself away from you
Cause I now know how much you hate me.
Though we met accidentally
I know how much you hated that glimpse of mine.
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Poorvi Shetty
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 April 2018

Beauty lies in eternity, widening and exploring into vastness of the heart. Someone who takes so long to feel the warmth of the awaiting beloved may not be the soul mate. Love has to rise above the differences. Beautiful poem dear poetess. Thanks for the sharing.

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Poorvi Shetty 04 April 2018

A small flame has burnt his heart. That is keeping him away from desiring the warmth.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 April 2018

Due to hate one person takes interest to pull himself away. This brings sorrow. Beauty of life is in love and forgiveness. A nice poem is well penned...10

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Poorvi Shetty 04 April 2018

The pulling away I am talking about is due to love and not hatred. The precaution of not hurting a wounded heart further is the cause for pulling away oneself.

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