Friday, January 20, 2012

Pursuits Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the folks on the pursuit of joy,
Ride a rollercoaster across time
Finding and losing at each bend
The feel of terror in all its ecstasy
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Quintin van Deventer
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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2012

Stunning! A beautiful reservoir of touching words and rich imagery which makes this well crafted with its impressive rhymes pattern, superb write! Talent is clearly filtered through this thought provoking write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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