Put Your Feet In My Shoes Comments

you aren't a coal miner, are you! i like this. nice rhyming, flow, and 'story'. and i like the title and how it is not repeated in the poem, yet alluded to several times. oops! my mistake; it IS repeated, but with If you added. i like it even better now. a poet's note? i can't help but wonder if this is a true account of your life, the life of someone you've heard about, or a story you made up. yes, i suppose a foul coal mine gives a pretty glum picture of one's life. thanks for sharing. i'll send to MyPoemList. i just happened to see your name on a ph list as i was looking for 'achill lad'. your 'name' was difficult to resist. bri :)