Pyramid, A Miracle Of Geometry Poem by Ashutosh Dash

Pyramid, A Miracle Of Geometry

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While walking across the desolates intimating, The Egyptian Civilization;
I endured my mortal mind and soul through the plateaus before my eyes;
Exploring a mighty geometrical province, gleaming across the sands;
I discovered an esoteric premise, perhaps the divine immortal's enchant.

Walking through the arid plains, as I walked down the mighty premise;
I explored the presence of an eternal energy, radiating before my eyes;
I found myself walking across, all alone through the broadening heavens;
Exploring the immortal does survive within me, I am the heavenly premise.

When I looked up with my eyes, in a glimpse of the mournful breeze;
I could envision the mighty celestials, in the timeless ocean of thee;
A moment later, when my little eyes, curious to discover it's eminence;
I explored the edge of spiritual knowledge, an eternal divine intense.

Upon walking through the arid sands, dissolving every thought of mine;
I explored a province of devotion, enthralling it's edges as they shine;
The premise that intends, enduring my soul with an energetic elixir;
The ocean yet arid, shall submerge the eternal wings of fire.

ASHUTOSH DASH
CLASS VIII
RUCHIKA HIGH SCHOOL

Pyramid, A Miracle Of Geometry
Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

reread this several times Ashutosh delighting in the lines 'I explored the edge of spiritual knowledge, an eternal divine intense.' yes yet God can be so peaceful also, ever noticed how when God smiles the universe shines? not unexpectedly ride a motorcycle with death and yes death laughs, other mysteries in life are as common as sands on Giza plateau.

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