Question 4 Poem by RIC BASTASA

Question 4

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The problem with your
declarative sentences
is that they
are all conclusive

then your interjections
have become too shocking
that we cannot really
think that deep and
well, intelligently

i think you better try
those clauses...and better
still have more time
with interrogatories, like

is it true?
like, why is that?

now look at you you look so
open
you look so
beautiful, like an open door
and open window

a river with a mouth
a Suez canal


Oh, my, you have such an open mind?

i don't wonder
that 'wander is still the beginning of your
step to wisdome'

Is that you really?

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