to The Light Poem by RIC BASTASA

to The Light

Rating: 2.6


to the light
we aim ourselves
away from darkness
we swear

but i guess
not too much light
in the same manner
that i do not
have so much of
this darkness

to both
we shall be blinded
let us settle
midway

to dusk let us toast
this drink
of gray

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 10 February 2012

Very good poem. I like it.congratulation.

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Catrina Heart 16 September 2009

nice written poem........loved it! ! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

truely relieving. keep writing!

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Effie Yalena Steyn 20 September 2009

This is truly beautiful, thank you. Effie.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 June 2019

to the light we aim ourselves away from darkness we swear.....so touching and true. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Bhagabat prasad hotta 13 November 2018

Nice poem.....I like it....so nice...10++++++

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2017

Excellent expression. Our life offers things which may not be of our liking but we have to make adjustments. A positive attitude which calls for celebrating what comes our way. Thanks for sharing a nice poem. to dusk let us toast / this drink / of gray

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Sahra Hussein 03 December 2015

I liked this one please read my poems and give your opinion

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Heather Wilkins 14 June 2013

to dusk let us toast this drink of gray. amen

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