The horse in the field breathes deeply
And looks across in my direction
As if asking a question, how long?
The birds sing an early morning litany
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Lifes offerings and mysteries provoke many a sane query, as so very well depicted in your piece....I like this, David...Quality work architected by a quality writer. FjR
Lifes offerings and mysteries provoke many a sane query, as so very well depicted in your piece....I like this, David...Quality work architected by a quality writer. FjR
Life is to question David, from our childhood we drive our parents mad with one question, Why...? 10
An inquisitive mind helps us stay sane, for life is a mytery! Good poetry loaded with sound imaginations about life. worth the 10.
A song put it best, an old, old song........'Until the 12th of Never and that's a long, long time...'. I don't know about architected whatever as mentioned this am at 5: 30, don't know how to describe poems in such manner...To me it's about the content and what it says and that you have done excellently...We will have all the answers one day, think it will be when we're with those angels you mention here..What a great theme you picked here David...You are so very good at touching people's emotions and that's what poety is all about......A++++~~~~~marci.x0