Portia Lane

Quick Fix

Longtime no talk
Longer time no see
Got me goin crazy over here
See what you doin to me
Hair fallin out
Can’t concentrate
Don’t wanna be with anyone else
Canceling all my dates
Face constantly in a pillow
Don’t want the world to hear my screams
Friends mad at me
Sayin recently I’ve been mean
I can’t say they’re wrong
But don’t wanna say they’re right
Feeling’s in my heart
Tears I gotta fight
I just need a quick fix
So call me asap

Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2009

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Comments about Quick Fix by Portia Lane

  • Tatiana Guerrier (12/24/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    AMAZING! it's like your another me lol. I experienced it all, and changements occured drastically.i give you an applause = ]

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  • David B (11/17/2009 4:28:00 PM)

    your hair is falling out, oh no... we need to get you a wing.

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  • Allan O (11/6/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    interesting writting...very intense and yet slightly emotional...thanks Portia ~^..^

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