Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Quick Tick Comments

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the clock moves forward
tick tock tick tock
just like my life
too quick too quick
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Adeline A Roberts
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Adeline Foster 23 February 2014

Ah yes, we all wish and we all bemoan. You said it well. Read mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline

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Bri Edwards 24 June 2013

short and sweet. at least humans can look back in their minds at their lives. of course it is not always enjoyable to do so! i especially enjoyed the 4th and 6th lines. thanks for sharing. i put this in my poems list.

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